"Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People in today's world have become too dependent on automobiles. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer."
Automobiles have drastically affected people’s lives. Today, there isn’t a member of family who doesn’t have a car in his house. Personally, I believe that people rely on vehicles rather than their feet. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, usage of automobiles in daily life has made people too dependent on them. Workers are the main people who use automobiles to drive to their work, which assist them to be punctual. Employers are too strict nowadays, so they have specific criteria for their employer amongst which punctuality is one. Thus, individuals try their best to be an early bird in their office, so that they don’t lose their labor. My parent’s experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, my mother worked in a kindergarten, and she was usually late for work because she had to change my brother’s diaper every morning and feed him before going to work. Soon, she received many warnings from her boss that pushed her to purchase a Toyota, so she can get to her office on time. Till today, she can’t go to her work without a vehicle.
Secondly, people are very sluggish in today’s world, which make them dependent on automobiles. Parents use car to drive to work; children use bus to get to school; and grandparents use taxi to get to their children’s home. It is obvious that using something consistently turns to a habit. We rely on automobiles even when we want food! Consequently, everyone uses vehicle just because they are very lethargic. For instance, long ago, my brother was in opinion of that using car isn’t good for heath, so he went everywhere by his feet. Now that he has turned twenty-one, he can’t even go to the restaurant in our downtown to get a pizza. He says “I have used school bus for twelve years, my personal car for two years, and my friend’s motorcycle for a year. Of course I am too lazy to go by my foot.” Hence, it can be inferred that people are dependent on vehicles because they are too lazy.
Consequently, I am of the opinion that automobiles have become a part of human’s life. his is because they need it in their daily life, and because they are too lazy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: His
...ave become a part of human's life. his is because they need it in their daily ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, i feel, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78772378517 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87324645002 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537084398977 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1803463497 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7727272727 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1236322514 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467395832163 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386972975482 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819621674508 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192808756219 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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