do you agree or disagree with the following statement? people would be happier if they had fewer possessions.
In today’s modern world, shopping is an indispensable part of person’s everyday life. diverse stores ranging from small store to huge malls, have been established in order to respond to this issue. With this in mind, some people hold the opinion that shopping more bring them more joy and happiness whereas other think otherwise. As far as I am concerned, having more possessions do not guarantee happy life. I feel this way for great number of reasons among which increasing stress and spending money and energy for up keeping of products and helping poor people are considerable.
To begin with, undoubtedly, the more one possesses, the more concerned he or she become to losing them. In this case, not only having more possession not make a person happy, but also he or she feel more stressed out and nervous and must allot lot of energy in order to protect and keep a particular product. For instance, when someone buys an expensive product like diamond ring, this person is unconsciously and intentionally concerned about losing the ring; therefore, he or she feel more anxious and possessing a diamond ring has no impact on her or his happiness.
Secondly, people in order to possess more products must spend an immense amount of money. therefore; people must work and thrive harder to acquire more money. Moreover, having more belongings, has its own cost. Take insurance’s cost as an illustration. When someone possesses an expensive thing, he or she must spend great deal of money for insuring a particular product. In my opinion, the money and time one must allot to own more products, could use for better purposes such as spending more quality time with family members or friends, or spending money for traveling which is a good way to release stress and increase happiness.
Last but not least, today’s world confronts the global economic crisis. Many countries are now in the midst of the longest recession and because of this recession, great deal of people have loosed their job and have become hard up. With this in mind, in my view, as a human being is responsibility of all people to help one another. One way which can be helpful is rather than spending less money on unnecessary and useless products, donate this money to different charities or organizations and this way help other people. Such extravagance is shameful when there are people starving in the world. By helping other people, we can cope with poverty and ultimately improve our society significantly.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, I strongly convinced that people in order to feel more fulfilled and happy, do not have to possess more belongings, on the ground that to own more possession, one must spend great deal of money and energy for maintenance of her or his possessions; additionally, this money can use for helping needy and eliminating poverty in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Diverse
...le part of person's everyday life. diverse stores ranging from small store to huge...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...make a person happy, but also he or she feel more stressed out and nervous and must ...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...t losing the ring; therefore, he or she feel more anxious and possessing a diamond r...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... must spend an immense amount of money. therefore; people must work and thrive harder to ...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
... must spend an immense amount of money. therefore; people must work and thrive harder to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2418.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98556701031 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78471604055 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503092783505 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.794527147 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0952380952 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0738105094297 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290387617198 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307083338899 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0512950805765 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270178291132 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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