do you agree or disagree with the following statement? it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Undoubtfuly, commencing a job is an inevitable and crucial juncture in the life of most of the people, since leading an even simple life is not feasible without a job. In today’s modern world because of rapid evolvement of industry, lots of companies seek to become successful not only without taking risk but also in a rapid way. In this regard, there is a fierce controversy as to whether it is better to work quickly and take any risk or the other way around. As far as I am concerned, the virtues of working slow and more accurately significantly outweigh those of working fast. I feel this way for great number of reasons among which diminishing mistake and grave risk, having stress-free work environment are considerable.
To begin with, as It was mentioned, thanks to development of industry, nowadays commencing new business is relatively easier than before; therefore, lots of people take advantage of this situation and commence their own businesses. As a result, there is an immense amount of competitions among companies or factories. All of these businesses want to defeat their rival and by doing so attract more customers. With this in mind, if a business works fast without considering possible risk and danger, as a consequence, its rival businesses will defeat the business readily. For instance, it is vivid that advertisement plays an essential role in introducing diverse businesses to the world and convince costumers to buy a particular product. In this regard, the strategy or method which a company use for advertising is exceedingly prominent and it needs to debate deliberately; hence, if a company choose a method for advertising rapidly and without considering all of the aspects of it, it will jeopardize the whole company, maybe even cause a bankruptcy in large-scale. As you can see, without any shadow of doubt, working fast and taking grave risk will put business in bad position and is followed by irreparable consequences.
Secondly, it is vivid that working in stress-free work place is extremely utilitarian for both employees and companies. Due to this fact that the less stress one has, the more efficient and effective he or she can work and ultimately it will increase the business productively. Working with accelerated, regardless of type of the work, is always associated with great deal of stress which is the major reason for increasing mistakes in a job; therefore, if one works slowly, because of lack of stress in order to carry out a task rapidly, the chance of making no mistakes will progressively grow up. As an illustration, I can remember that years ago I worked at the factory where was the major factory of distributing doll in my hometown. Because of immense amount of doll that employees must distribute in the city, all of employees must work relatively fast. As a result, lots of dolls distributed among wrong houses and this act disturbed and upset lots of costumers. More precisely, if the factor had not put employee under pressure to work fast, dolls would have delivered to the right houses and the costumers would be gratified correspondingly.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, I strongly convince that working in modest speed and having everything under control has more merits rather than working fast and without considering the possible risks on the ground that this way, one can work in stress-free environment and increase the productivity of the company. The thing I sure about is in near future, people can underscore the importance of this type of decision-making.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rapid way" with adverb for "rapid"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...l not only without taking risk but also in a rapid way. In this regard, there is a fierce cont...
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Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...s regard, there is a fierce controversy as to whether it is better to work quickly and take a...
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Line 3, column 962, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rtising rapidly and without considering all of the aspects of it, it will jeopardize the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2982.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 591.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04568527919 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93056706295 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00440153401 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495769881557 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 946.8 618.680645161 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 14.0 3.51792114695 398% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5150699796 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254318902598 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734354295299 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617476944233 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158671319524 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405310740646 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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