do you agree or disagree with the following statement? life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Today’s life style due to various development in diverse field such as technology or education, is utterly different from it was in the past. With this in mind, there is a heated controversy as to whether life today is easier in compare to the past or not. As far as I am concerned, nowadays people can have more comfortable life. I feel this way for great number of reasons among which, having more access to modern facilities, evolvement of education system and diminishing economy cruises are considerable.
To begin with, the more technology evolves, the more facilities become available for people. These facilities such as high-speed internet or modern cars to name but two, can facilitate the life for people. For instance, thanks to modern transportation vehicles, one can reach to her or his destination not only faster but also safer. In contrast, in the past lack of state-of-the-art transportation vehicle have created major problems like mortal accidents for people. Moreover, nowadays people can apply complicated computer system to speed up the progress of their work and to do them more accurately. We can see, how the elderly complains about the substantial amount of time which they devoted in order to completed their task without assistance of computers. As you can see, life now is easier than it was in the past.
Secondly, education system in our grandparent’s time was very poor and without consideration of children’s need.in the past, Defection in educational material and proper education’s method made it difficult for most of the student to pursue their interests in higher education level. for instance, my grandfather always reminds us that if he was able to use today’s educational system, he could become a doctor which is his dream job. nowadays with evolvement of education system, every child has this opportunity to study in well-equipped schools. They can take advantage of proficient teachers and continue their education in proper manner.
Last but not least, although there are still mortal diseases all around the world, compare to the past these crises have been diminished immensely. in the past, substantial amount of death was consequences of lack in modern medical facilities. In contrast, today because of noticeable medical achievements, there are relatively fewer diseases which are not curable. What is more, today people can take advantage of diverse health benefit and skilled doctors which are essential factor in order to have healthy life. all in all, today people can feel less worried about mortal and dangerous diseases.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, I strongly believe that life today is relatively more comfortable and easy in compare to the past on the ground that people can benefit from diverse modern facilities such as advanced transportation system and state-of-the-art medical equipment. The thing that I am sure about is in near future technology going to evolve more and more and due to this development life will become even easier than it is today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: For
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Suggestion: Nowadays
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Suggestion: All
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2584.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24137931034 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01990047655 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503042596349 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 821.7 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3902516487 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4090909091 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95454545455 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197538266084 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659698269087 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633339057936 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123539409173 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509820763528 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.