Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should nevermake an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to supportyour answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never

make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support

your answer.

General misconception always debates on the benifits of the single handed decions. However this seems short-eyed and

any individual must weigh multiple opinions of the pepople that surround him/her in daily life. Taking decion seems not a

big deal but the consequences and far effects of a decison is what matters the most. Consulting the other one or many before any

major decision is quite important as decisions has to be made only after paying heed to after effects, different perspective and the opinions of closed ones.

Any major decision stands upon multiple of things such as past experience, present situation and so on. One should

understand very well what a major decision has effects on surroundings that it is bound to. For instance, in a family

suppose the only earning member say, a mother decides to resign her exsiting job since she is bored and does not really enjoy it.

Such a decsion may well affect her family if the family is deep need of finances. Such a decison can not be taken alone just

at the heat of moment. She has to consult her closed ones who form the first inner circle in her life. After effects of such

a hurried decion may lead to existential crisis to the family in the present societal setup.

Some decisons may not have that wide range after effects but might turn into a disasters in one life who is bound to decide.

Suppose a manager wotking in e-commerce decides to shut a unit just because sales are performing poor. Perhaps even decides

to claim this decision to be a pathbreaker inorder to overcome loss figures. This decision might turn foolish and

will be wrong at so many levels, if the festive season is up in nearby time. People tend to buy more and often rely on e-commerce these day

to cater their needs. Manager consulting his peers unable to garner different perspective might utterly fail and underperform with respect to sales numbers.

At times, close people who surround ourselves in our lifes know us better at some point of time. Some decisons need second or may be third

opinions that make a decision a right one. Closed ones typically imagine what an impact could be if a decision is taken. For instance, imagine

if a father in a family decides to change the school of a child just because the child is unable to mingle in social mileu and is often shy and reserved.

You never know what could be the reason behind such a behaviour. Such decion needs to collectively taken by both the parents to identify the actual

root cause rather than simply taking a decision. In this scenario, the father has to prolongedly talk to his wife and discuss what's going wrong and what can be done

to make things right.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... benifits of the single handed decions. However this seems short-eyed and any indivi...
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...cions. However this seems short-eyed and any individual must weigh multiple opini...
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...in daily life. Taking decion seems not a big deal but the consequences and far ef...
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...aily life. Taking decion seems not a big deal but the consequences and far effec...
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...sulting the other one or many before any major decision is quite important as dec...
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... present situation and so on. One should understand very well what a major decisi...
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...s bound to. For instance, in a family suppose the only earning member say, a mother d...
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...ch a decison can not be taken alone just at the heat of moment. She has to consul...
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...orm the first inner circle in her life. After effects of such a hurried decion may...
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...ircle in her life. After effects of such a hurried decion may lead to existential...
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...e in her life. After effects of such a hurried decion may lead to existential ...
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...performing poor. Perhaps even decides to claim this decision to be a pathbreaker...
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...es. This decision might turn foolish and will be wrong at so many levels, if the ...
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...This decision might turn foolish and will be wrong at so many levels, if the fest...
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...e and often rely on e-commerce these day to cater their needs. Manager consulting...
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...d often rely on e-commerce these day to cater their needs. Manager consulting h...
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... decisons need second or may be third opinions that make a decision a right one. Close...
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...decision is taken. For instance, imagine if a father in a family decides to chang...
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...sion is taken. For instance, imagine if a father in a family decides to change ...
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...rolongedly talk to his wife and discuss whats going wrong and what can be done to m...
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...hats going wrong and what can be done to make things right.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, third, well, as to, for instance, such as, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77589852008 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4183292766 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526427061311 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8193731462 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.125 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7083333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.53405017921 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0616281782767 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0185720998511 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271088472747 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0181119910011 0.150856017488 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276309232928 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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