Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
It is always said the it is better to live among loved ones espcially parents so that the life on an individual seems to be a complete one. However I strongly disagree to the point and claim that it is always better to live independently as soon as possible. This is because today's young adult is tomorrow's citizen and for an adult to lead his life in a societal setup he/she must be focused, matured and self-reliable.
There are quite a couple of things that happen when parents are around. Relatives, friends, family gatherings and many such activities where the young adult in a family might deviate from his goal. Such situations at sometimes seems unavoidable as it demands for compelte presence. Suppose a distant relative new to the town falls ill. However at the same time, parents are out of town and hence advise you to take care of him/her. As said, such situation is unavoidable and you have to spare your time. Such situations can be well avoided if you are independent from your parents and can be well on track without losing the focus.
Reliability defines a person and his personality. It forms the most basic attribute of any grown up individual. COnsider a situation where a young adult is about to take a decision regarding his/her finacial stability. If such a person is by and large dependent on parents he/she does not really understand the gravity of the situation and starts taking things lighter and easier even if they are quintessential. A personal must stand on his own in a society and must feel theresponsibility of themselvees and the family surrounding themselves. Such decisions can be capably taken only if the young adult is independent from parents and learns many new different things in day to day life.
A person's character is judged on so many levels. What stands out among them is the maturity level. An individual needs to be matured in order to understand quite a few things which govern his or her life turns. For example, emotions play a vital role in any scenario and one must know when to prostrate and when to overcome.For instance, if parents continuously insist their children to gather in family function even if at the cost of study hours, a young adult must me matured enough what to carry over and what not. A matured individual is able to understand the differences and can outrightly reject such offers. Maturity does not really develop in s single day as it comes with expiriences sometimes may be bad expeiriences that a young adult must go through in order attain such maturity standards.
All in all, there are varous benifits from seeking indepence from the parents at an earlier stage of life as it ois quite advantageous and beneficial for an young adult in an overall way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
It is always said the it is better to live among loved ones espc...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... individual seems to be a complete one. However I strongly disagree to the point and cl...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ant relative new to the town falls ill. However at the same time, parents are out of to...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...rent things in day to day life. A persons character is judged on so many levels. ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... when to prostrate and when to overcome.For instance, if parents continuously insis...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s quite advantageous and beneficial for an young adult in an overall way.
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Message: Consider replacing "in an overall way" with adverb for "overall"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...geous and beneficial for an young adult in an overall way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2288.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79664570231 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75071425175 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494758909853 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9818182912 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4782608696 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7391304348 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26086956522 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284031962576 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713729193488 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596333058953 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159903887097 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298202617832 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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