Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that people have to make important decision during their life. Since everyone for own progression in her/his life need make important decision s which even completely change people life for the better or create worse situations. Although, some individuals reckon that people should make important decision by themselves, I hold an opposite view for a couple of reasons described in the following.
To begin with, a person for important decision should consult with other people, since everyone has valuable experience and positively can help to person to decide carefully specially in important matters. For example, in some topics such as marriage or purchasing a car or a house are very important to take other people experience. because, other people probably have similar experience with is helpful for a person to avoid becoming unsuccessful.
Secondly, in some decisions are crucial to people consider other views and points such as specialist. For instance, some people have a plan to conduct a new business or choose a major at the university. Hence, it would be necessary to talk about people specially people who are expert considered filed. Since, they can examine various aspects of for example running a new business and the risk of failing can be reduced and they became successful. On the other hand, if they cannot hopefully consider various points and view, they can lose even their live and a wrong decision can pose a dire effect on people life. The statistics in Iran show that business leader who are famous in their business have several expert advisers and all the time consider their adviser's points.
It is true that everyone has a deep insight about his character and personality and comprehensively understand an important situation based on his knowledge. Nevertheless, in important decision it is better to people take other points, because can save their time and their money, since a right person can positively show suitable path for avoiding failing based on valuable experience.
To conclude, for aforementioned reasons I strongly believe that people should not make important decision by themselves and it is crucial for their decision to consult with other people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ortant to take other people experience. because, other people probably have similar exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21229050279 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77047098946 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488826815642 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2291159255 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160123611649 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06979049758 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651534132931 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122221159381 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575599466376 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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