Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
There is no doubt that our life has been reshaped by technology in more than one way. As a result, people have to adapt themselves with significant changes. It seems to me that young people have to arrange a well-organized plan to become successful.
To begin with, young people should get knowledge about their interests and characteristic to choose an appropriate major at the university. based on a suitable major which is elected carefully, youth can put lots of effort to promote in their academic achievement. For example, the statistic in Iran clearly show that the vast majority of successful people at the university have chosen an appropriate major based on their interest and abilities.
Secondly, youth should expand the network of their relationship positively. An inappropriate friend can pose a dire effect on the youth life. these friends can damage the moral values in the youth people and promote delinquency such as drag abuse among them. Furthermore, youth should consider the negative effects of social network on their life. Since, social networks can waste the time of youth people and prevent them to allocate their time into important goles.
Thirdly, youth people should have a healthy life style, because the vast majority of them have a sedentary life style which can brings for them some diseases such as blood pressure or obesity.
Eventually, youth should learn various skills to have plenty of job opportunities in the features. Because, the companies all the time have needed talented and multi-skill employees and have hired these people. Skill related to technology such as using internet efficiently is essential to all people. Youth can use their time efficiently and enroll in various classes to enhance their abilities and their skills. For example, a couple of years ago I participated in a specific class in the computer science and can take a certificate. After that this certificate help me to be employed by a high-reputation company.
To conclude, I strongly believe that youth should have a well- organized plan for their life to become successful in the various aspect of their life such as education, relationship and career.
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- TPO-40 - Integrated Writing Task 80
- TPO-50 16
- Tpo- 39-1 3
- TPO-34-1 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children(five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities.Use 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Based
...an appropriate major at the university. based on a suitable major which is elected ca...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...n pose a dire effect on the youth life. these friends can damage the moral values in ...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...m have a sedentary life style which can brings for them some diseases such as blood pr...
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Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ter science and can take a certificate. After that this certificate help me to be emp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84797463022 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531073446328 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0225184773 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2631578947 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17329044514 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581749647044 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050134363237 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110579132429 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493036171185 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.