Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Rules in society are not stable and can be changed. Today, cumbersome and baseless laws have been partially removed and replaced by rules that take into account human rights. I fundamentally disagree with this statement that young people to follow and obey are too strict. This essay will enlarge upon the idea that examines current rules that young people must follow and rules that were imposed on young people in the past.
To commence with, In the past, young people did not have any opinion, and they should obey the rules of their family and the society. They should respect their parent's wishes or even the village's needs and overrule their needs and desire. For instance, a farmer kid did not have the choice to follow their dream or disagree with their parent. Even their marriage was arranged without their opinion which shows they should follow the rules very seriously, otherwise, they will be abandoned by society and no one would help them. As a result, In the past, the rules that existed in society have been very troublesome for young people.
Moreover, nowadays, there are many organizations that rely on human rights and freedom of thought laws to protect human beings, especially young people. In other words, countries, and societies today make their own laws not based on common rules in societies but with laws that value They pay for humanity and freedom.
In the end, however, there are more laws today, because a more complex society follows the rules more closely and makes the consequences more humane. Not only will young adults have more voice and rights, but society will be better protected. Here, I reiterate that young people today have more freedom of action because the rules are much easier today than ever before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92929292929 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18298696715 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511784511785 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6907454137 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277957421014 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116520718674 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102052600305 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179031878423 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977246960492 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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