Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better to be dishonest. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
No one can deny the fact that honesty is a trait that everyone needs to acquire. In the given scenario, it is perceived it does not make any difference if we be dishonest sometimes. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that we could not be better person if we are not honest with ourself as well others. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, no can pave the path of success with dishonesty. To be more precise, we need to be loyal to everyone if not then it will be of our own loss. Drawing from my own experience, one of my co worker used to make excuses to perform any assigned task. She even used to make fake excuse of her heath condition to get rid of work. Needless to say, this activity of her hampered herself rather than other as she lose the chance to prove herself as an intelligent worker. Furthermore, if she had accomplish her given task then it would create better opportunity to foster her career. Thus, dishonesty merely contribute to our loss.
Secondly, once the person get accustomed to do bad deeds for their comfort, it might work for short run nevertheless it is not fruitful in long term. In addition, we could loss our self respect and dignity which eventually lead things go wrong. I have witnessed this in my own personal life. My co- worker again for instance, since she was habituated of making false excuse and enjoying privilege eventually, her deeds could not get shade for long and got fired instantly. Therefore, nothing can be accomplished if we have false intention. Sooner or later it will return to us which devastate our path of success.
The above statement sounds reasonable yet sometimes dishonesty could motivate to ace and this should not be overlooked. To exemplify, my sister was poor in her study and time and again she used to get demotivate nevertheless I used to motivate her saying her study was good. Eventhough it was a lie, it prompt her to be more focused towards her study consequently she aced her board exam. Therefore, if intentions are right then it does not matter for being disloyal.
All things considered, despite the fact sometimes it costs nothing for not telling truth , we should be mindful of we reap what we sow therefore being disloyal is not welcoming as this is not going to work every time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loses'.
Suggestion: loses
...mpered herself rather than other as she lose the chance to prove herself as an intel...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'accomplished'.
Suggestion: accomplished
...lligent worker. Furthermore, if she had accomplish her given task then it would create bet...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'accomplished'.
Suggestion: accomplished
...lligent worker. Furthermore, if she had accomplish her given task then it would create bet...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to doing'.
Suggestion: accustomed to doing
...ur loss. Secondly, once the person get accustomed to do bad deeds for their comfort, it might w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...espect and dignity which eventually lead things go wrong. I have witnessed this i...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etimes dishonesty could motivate to ace and this should not be overlooked. To ex...
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Message: Did you mean 'prompts'?
Suggestion: prompts
...y was good. Eventhough it was a lie, it prompt her to be more focused towards her stud...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61927710843 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62891433814 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539759036145 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4763698532 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1363636364 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127371326291 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393538601355 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385640003488 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762162360989 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309076772373 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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