Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends
Teachers play most important roles in our lives. Besides parents, teacher's are the one's who correct our mistakes. I am sure, some people think students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends and other people just deny them. In my view, Teachers influence students a lot for two reasons.
First, they guide ourselves to lead a good life. Teachers through their vast experience can identify special attributes and interests a student possess. So, they can identify where we can enhance and guides us to follow that path. For example, when i was in University college of engineering kakinada, my professor Dr.Srinivas identified my interest in the field of Geology. He encouraged me to study profoundly about rocks and aquifers which are present in surface and as well as subsurface environments. While studying more and more i felt more enthusiastic rather than bored. This interest ultimately lead me to publish an International Review journal evaluating and stating the summary of around two hundred international journals.
Second, they correct our mistakes. Teachers always strives for students success and well behavior. In order to keep us in right track they sometimes choose to be harsh with us. For example, the same professor Dr.Srinivas in the initial days, was quite harsh with respect to my behavior on attending classes. Back in those days Srinivas asked why I was not regular to classes and corrected my behavior and brought me back on track to achieve good in life. From then on I changed my behavior, went regularly to the classes, got noticed for sincerity and work i do to attain my goal by the same professor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, in my view, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02554744526 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74258599349 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.180302978 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221661219409 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663614163483 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900734709328 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162298862186 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109577831011 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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