Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the beginning of time, there is widely accepted that postulates are not always what they seem. The inevitable question which has always caused heated debates is whether student more impacted by their tutor than by thie friends. I concur that there is a causal relationship between students and their friends; due to the facet, they are of the same age, and they have more common opinions. There are several reasons, two of which in the following paragraphs will delve into my reasons and examples, justifying my point of view.
The first remarkable reason to be mentioned is that because they are at the same age so they can spend more time together, so they have more impact on each other.notwithstanding, some people believe that there are one or two little snags that need to be ironed out. They think it is a mistake if you believe age among the students cannot play an integral role in having a deep impact on each other. In contrast, they believe because they are of the same age and same average experience about life, so they have a limited perspective and idea that they can share. I have yet to voice my idea; nevertheless, I hold the view that it is a catch -22 perspective as well as there is no consistent pattern of thinking. There is a world-famous proverb that says, "no one can serve two masters" with this in mind. I adhere to the idea that students of the same age have a better opportunity to convey their experience to each other so they can have a profound and critical impact on each other. Consider the following example, if a student in a class learn how to
programming new language, he can teach these skills so more accessible to other students because they have the same attitude
about how to tackle a problem.
The other equally important reason is that student follows their friend's opinion . in most of the case they try to wear the clothes like them.
They are trying to do whatever their friends accept and encourage them. This behavior has psychological roots. There are many ways that can be employed, however, to consider and elaborate on this perspective and provide merits. Without a shadow of a doubt, everybody like to feel positive emotion such as confirmation, happiness, and encourage. When we hang out with our friends, and they are accepted and encourages us, this feeling will be a boost, which has played a prominent role in every individual's life. To show you what I mean, if a student hears a positive word from their friend, so it is evident that s/he tries to do as their rules.
In conclusion, contemplating the aforementioned discussions, one could easily surmise that all my Original intention was to evaluate tangible factors, and I would like to stress that it is impossible to Neglect them. I am of the opinion that teachers cannot play a very critical role for their students if they are making friendly communication with them.
It is highly recommended that the parents make close-knit communication with their children, and do not just order to them what to do, what not to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, as to, i mean, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2540.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76547842402 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75449513954 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491557223265 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 803.7 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1728819221 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.454545455 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2272727273 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199698849536 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712994505378 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799070431869 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106555119272 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572189143988 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.