Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We are building our future by preparing and practicing in now. By reading biography of succesful people, we can realise that a lot of different factors are effective in being successful. Some people believe that having a good relation with others is the most important factor in being successful. However, I think preparing yourself by studying hard in school can bring you success because of two reasons.
First, you can develop a lot of different skills by studying hard in school. successful people usually encounter a lot of different problems in their lives, as result they need a vast range of knowledge for solving these problems, which can gained by studying hard in school or at university. For example, when I was at the university, I did not study very much because I did not like some courses. However, I was in love with one of my courses called Mechanical Desing, which is about procedure to design different types of mechanical component. So, I studied it a lot, and fortunately I became master on it. After university, I was turn down by a lot of companies, but after a lot of search, finally I got a job that needed that course. So, by studying hard in school, you can develop a lot of skills that can help you for being successful in the future.
Second, you can have a lot of communication with other people by studying hard in school. When you are studying hard, a lot of your classmates will refer to you for solving their problem or working with you. For instance, when I was studying my master grade, one of my classmates, Mohammad, was very hardworker and persevere in studying. He could answer every question from different problems and majors, and he had a lot of friend because of that. One day, I got a project from my comapny that I was working part time, and I could not solve part of that project. So I went to
Mohaamd for solving this problem. After he explained problem to me, I found out that I could not do the project alone, thereby I asked my friend to participate in the project with half share of income. In sum, you can a lot of friend by having a vast range of knowledge which can lead to be more successful.
All and all, I believe that studying hard in school can lead to a promising future because you have differnt skills and a lot of friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Successful
...rent skills by studying hard in school. successful people usually encounter a lot of diffe...
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Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of friends'.
Suggestion: a lot of friends
...fferent problems and majors, and he had a lot of friend because of that. One day, I got a proje...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ject from my comapny that I was working part time, and I could not solve part of that pro...
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Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...solve part of that project. So I went to Mohaamd for solving this problem. After ...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of friends'.
Suggestion: a lot of friends
...h half share of income. In sum, you can a lot of friend by having a vast range of knowledge whi...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_AND_ALL[1]
Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all in all' (=after all, nevertheless)?
Suggestion: All in all
... which can lead to be more successful. All and all, I believe that studying hard in school...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51442307692 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6302559033 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449519230769 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8868540269 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221110759009 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800754200434 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655349793667 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132991204811 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331309133234 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.