TPO21
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Evidently scoring more job opportunities is the hope of every student that have graduated. Although having top grades would be important in finding diligent offers for ones career, I believe that ability to communicate is far more valuable. I will describe why I feel this way with several reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, Having stronger skills to relate with your coworkers are helpful to communicate with them. Sometimes it is necessary to ask for another opinion related to your situation to come up with a better solution. My personal experience is an indication of this. Three years ago, I used to work on my thesis for my Masters' degree which was on a completely new subject for me. If I wanted to solve my problem, I should have asked for some advice. Hereby I talked with other students and professors to acknowledge their experience. This immensely helped me to learn about new stuff that I wasn't familiar with then. As a result, I was able to finish my thesis earlier that I had expected, so I could have focused on other aspects of life, for instance, writing some articles to make my resume stronger.
Furthermore, If you can't present your area of expertise properly, you wouldn't have any luck in landing job interviews. Expressing your strong points and making them bold will result in finding more opportunities to land a job. It is a vital fact to explain about your specialty so that the recruiter understands your influence in the company, and persuade them to employ you. For example, In last few month, I was searching to find a job, and I did about five or four interviews. At the end of every single one of these meetings the examiner wasn't satisfied with my answers and believe that the lack of self confidence in my skills is the main drawback of my resume, and I should work on improving it. Therefore, I decided to take action about this situation by working on my social skills to show my abilities in a clear manner. I tried talking to myself in the mirror and prepared my answers to assure myself that I am up to this task. Consequently, I was able to land a decent job in my last interview.
In conclusion, Even though studying hard is important, I prefer to build better social skills to express my abilities and expand my knowledge broadly.by cooperating with my coworkers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69682151589 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72665799636 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562347188264 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7526607359 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.05 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179844936201 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582935029528 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350699409549 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114522378063 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256453284314 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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