Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, in today sophisticated world, being successful is a primary goal for most individuals although it is not always easy to reach. Some people say risk-taking and doing cutting-edge stuff are requisite of success, on the other hand, many others believe being adept in the job you are doing is more effective to become successful. Of course, the second opinion can be correct to some extent, however, I stand with the former group for three main reasons, of which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
First of all, taking risks boost an individual’s creativity and makes their minds more productive, which eventually would lead to invention and a huge breakthrough. Most of the fascinating successes in recent decades had been happened by creating new devices and tools. In fact, if people just continue their current profession, and even become a skillful person, it will not lead to an innovative idea, and they can not become as prosperous as risk-taking people. On the other hand, when people start doing new things and taking risks, they gradually improve their mental capacity and creativity which will result in a more thriving and productive life.
Secondly, performing risky kinds of stuff and experiencing new things will expand people’s experiences, which will give them more ability to solve problems. When people do something new, they might make mistakes and get bad results. Not only are these failures time taking, but also, they might cost a lot of money. However, such unpleasant results can be turned into a learning opportunity. Therefore, even to succeed or fail, always there is something to be gained. These valuable experiences eventually would lead to achievements that cover all previous failures and costs. For instance, Edison had failed more than thousands of times before perfecting the light bulb, but in the end, he made a name and fortune for himself out of it.
Finally, there is a fact that pioneers always are daring people. You can not be the first one in a field, without being brave enough to take the first step in an unknown space. When you are the pioneer of a specialty, there will be no competitor for you at the first and you can use this more experience as an enormous advantage over your future opponents. For example, Bill gates presented the first operating system for personal computers and had become one of the richest persons in the world.
To conclude, successful individuals try to achieve their goals by taking risks and applying new methods rather than performing what they have done for thousands of times. Not only does taking risks increase people's creativity and experiences, which leads them to invent a cutting-edge product, but also it will give them to be the first one in their field and use advantages of that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01498929336 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69777708178 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546038543897 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9502662399 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.35 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220609781895 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640669121399 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650335059539 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130920020507 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435952641152 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.