Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
I absolutely agree with that statement, and I think successful people try new things and take risks than only doing what they know how to do well. I hold this opinion because of several reasons. First, by trying new things and taking risks, one's can experience new situations and conditions, which enables him to choose between different choices and select the best one. Second, to me, being monotone in routine life and doing only repetitive works, may results in boredom and ennui, and eventually causes failure and negative results.
According to my point of view, trying new things and taking risks helps someone to experience new situations and conditions. In other words, if someone put himself in various situations and touch different circumstances, he will obtain many information by his experiences, which enables him to think and make decisions more efficiently. Besides, being stable and doing what are already done, usually does not results in succession and triumph, because it makes one's information out of date and his beliefs are not practical any more.
Moreover, as far as I am concerned, being monotone in routine life and doing only repetitive works, will lead to boredom. For instance, I want to compare my father with my uncle according to their succession in their life. my father is an electrical engineer, as same as my uncle, but there is very important difference between them. My father used to take risks in almost every decision he makes, and he interests in experiencing new things. While my uncle always is stable and monotone in both his business and his behavior, and he usually prefers to do what he knows to do well. Therefore, it is obvious that my father is more successful than my uncle, in case of financial situations.
Generally, although it is true that taking risks is sometime dangerous, specifically in business, but it worth to experience manifold positions and situations due to become more successful and au courant in modern society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02424242424 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75790207859 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7751896559 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314705765534 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114366374324 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160908088663 0.0737576698707 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188350965725 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126198023071 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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