Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Success in general and financial prosperity, in particular, depends on various factors. From things beyond human control such as pure chance to conscious decisions like being punctual all help determine whether or not a person is likely to succeed. Taking risks though is probably one of the most controversial features that associate with business success.Some believe that it is imperative in order for one to flourish financially, to be willing to take risks while others disagree. In my view, being prepared to do what others are reluctant to, makes all the difference. I have two specific reasons for that opinion which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, ordinary actions or solutions often lead to ordinary results.After all, Doing the same thing over and over again and expecting a different result is the definition of insanity. Moreover, just trying to" be like Romans when Rome" will eventually prevent an individual to be clairvoyant enough to be able to detect possible opportunities that might present themselves during one's life. A compelling example of this is my uncle. Like many of his friends back in high school, he applied for a university in his city. Being a talented student, he managed to be enrolled in the most prestigious institution there. The problem was that he was and still is, unwilling to take any chances or do anything beyond the accepted norms. As a result, upon his graduation, he ignored a great number of possible chances to initiate his own business and instead opted to work for a huge a company. However, His friends who were not as acute started companies of their own and as you might have guessed are far more successful in their work than him.
Secondly, humans have always looked for new things: innovations which could change their lives for the better. Of course, no scientific breakthrough or any industrial development can become a reality without having the courage to dispel with routine conventions. For instance, Bill Gates, the founder of multinational computer giant, Microsoft, dropped out of college only to pursue a career in the unknown world of computers in a time when the prospect of this newborn industry was obscure at best. Nevertheless, through sheer force of determination, a vision exonerated from rigid structures or norms and a keen perception of his surrounding environment, he did the unimaginable. The most wealthy man ever lived on earth is also an adventurer who is ready to swim against the river. Breaking the rules where they are in his way of progress is his rule.
In sum, I hold the opinion that venturing or taking risks are necessary components of attaining success. Not only do ordinary things yield normal results, but also innovations are the key to prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... like being punctual all help determine whether or not a person is likely to succeed. Taking r...
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Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...es that associate with business success.Some believe that it is imperative in order ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...olutions often lead to ordinary results.After all, Doing the same thing over and over...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...es that might present themselves during ones life. A compelling example of this is m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, while, after all, for instance, in general, in particular, of course, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05206073753 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87697405041 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613882863341 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.251743757 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.904761905 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9523809524 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52380952381 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163445949871 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446483860729 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042997297577 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1111269601 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552368471939 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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