Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays
Teachers have an important role in our life. In fact, teaching students influence all part of their future life. Teaching always has a special position during history. Definitely, some people if asked would agree with the statement that the teachers were more appreciated and valued by people in the past while others have a negative attitude. As I am concerned, I totally disagree with the first opinion. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on the arguments to support my view.
The first point that to be mentioned is that nowadays, people care knowledge and learning new skills more than the past, so they care for teachers more too. In the past, the society could not understand the significance of knowledge and literacy but over time, people informed of the importance of knowledge, all of these caused they inform of the importance of the teacher in society.in today’s world, teaching is one of the valuable careers in every country. For example, in my country, the best career is teaching. The government determines a day in the calendar as a teacher day to appreciate them and show them, they have a significant situation in our country.
Another reason that deserves some words is that the income of a teacher is not comparable to the past. Governments allocate a good budget for their salaries. In the past, many teachers have not enough money to pay their daily expenses but now the condition completely changed. To illustrate that idea let’s consider the following example. I remember, my grandfather always told us how he has a hard life in the past because his income was low, he could not afford his daily expenses so his family was poor but one of my aunts decided in spite of my grandfather’s opposition became a teacher. She is teaching at high school and she has a good income and also three month holiday in a year and she is really satisfied with her condition.
By the way of conclusion, base on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that teachers are appreciated and valued by society today's rather than the past because of people more aware of the teacher’s position and also government pays them more money in order to have a better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e money in order to have a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, while, for example, in fact, by the way, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82105263158 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77431831362 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515789473684 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.6708826833 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.764705882 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281658263694 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074851481037 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822678211605 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173400544097 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061732055916 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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