Talking about such subject was always my favorait; where the moeny should go? sports or liblaries. In my opinion, universties must spend money on sports as much as they do for libraries because of three reasons. First, as wise people said, physical health will cause mental health. Second, people can become more socilized in these kind of activies. Third, it is a part of life and eveyone have the right to experience it. I will talk about my reasons more in detail in the following aragraphs.
First, there a direct relation between good physical condition and energitic soul. This statemnet have been proved by scientis and they understood this fact that people whom really care about their body and do more sport are more posibly success in studying and socilizing and other activities. There are several factors that cause this fact, for example people with greater body shape have more confident and this confident make them believe they'er ganna overcome any problem and challenge in their lives.
Second, many kind of social activites and sports, require the skil of teamwork. This means that people must learn how to interact with other if they want to participate. Teamwork help people become socilized and bring them happiness since humans are sor social beings and thats our nature. In addition, this teamwork would benefit students in other areas; for example, students thay play basketball together, can do many other think together like traveling, sdutying ect, since they know eachother and they practived with eachother before.
Third, there is no doubt that sports and social activites are just a part of life. our perpose of living in this world is to make money and have fun spending it. Social activities can help us increas our friendship network. We can share happiness of speding money with our friends. For example, some people go travel with their own friends and some of those friends are the one who met them in handball play.
In conclusion, paying attention to sports and social activities is important as much as libraries and classes since people need them mentally and physically and they can bring about socolized and more succeed students. also eveone havethis right to experience it because it is a part of life.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Sports
...my favorait; where the moeny should go? sports or liblaries. In my opinion, universtie...
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Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Suggestion: many kinds
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Suggestion: that's
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Suggestion: Our
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Suggestion: Also
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Suggestion: also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, so, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00533333333 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37649826425 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549333333333 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.798093418 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.380952381 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113544051945 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363607381583 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034898827685 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692403965492 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242562027887 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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