Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that women should get the same payment if taking the same task as men? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your opinion.
Every human being works to earn money and fulfill his/her basic needs. Pay is one of the key factors that motivate employees to work hard. Equal pay for men and women always remains an issue at the workplace. So, it’s important to develop pay arrangements that reward all employees fairly by providing equal pay for equal work. I will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, employers should pay women employees the same as men employees. However, in the United States has law that men and women must be paid the same amount of money for doing the same job, but the latest research illustrates that women earn 70 percent of what men earn in the U.S. Further, companies hire employees based on their talents, so they should provide salary also based on it, regardless raise or gender.
Second, even though for educating women and men both spend the same amount of time and money, they often do not receive the same salary for the same work. Equal wage is not only good for women but also help men by providing more leisure time from work. If women earn more then men do not have to work more hours to support their family. Similarly, an equal wage for women helps society as well. Community tax income is dramatical get affected by the pay gap. If women make more money compare to now, then they will get more tax.
Lastly, women are equally talented as men, they should be provided with equal opportunity as men. Female employees should feel good for coming to work and should be encouraged their talent and skills by providing the same pay as their men colleagues. Women’s both personal and professional get huge positive impact by providing equal salary to them.
Let’s put in a nutshell, equal pay not only benefits women but society as well. It helps to improvise the economical level of society. As being women strongly believe that women should get equal wages as men.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, similarly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73952095808 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33870667808 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511976047904 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.4018719296 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3157894737 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217178515472 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803561861927 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067277782003 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141282565482 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545314637419 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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