Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Working at home through telephone and computer is better than working in a company office.
Since COVID-19 swept the whole world, people have switched their work center from company offices to home. And with the development of software for working like DingTalk and Tencent Meeting, some people generate the idea that working at home through telephone and computer may be a better choice. However, I firmly hold that working in a company office is greater, especially considering that people can directly share their ideas in the office, and the working environment is closely connected to the working status.
First and foremost, working together in the office guarantees that people can share the latest ideas face to face immediately, instead of using phones and e-mail which may often be ignored. And promptness equals efficiency. Especially for policemen who are detecting cases in the police station, they are supposed to update the newest clues about cases timely, in order to capture the criminal as soon as possible; the Wall Street managers also should concentrate on the latest information about the stock market like the Dow index to grasp the best choice to make profits. Thus the necessity for the working in the office is even obvious to the laymen.
Secondly, the truth that working environment has the profound influence on people’s working status also provides abundant justification for my opinion. Most offices are designed to improve workers’ status so that people can get highly concentrated on their project for long time. According to the recent report conducted by UCLA, it investigated people’s attitudes to the working environment. And the result showed over 80% people bolstered that the office environment contributed to their working efficiency more than home did. They preferred the specialized devices like versatile desks and powerful computers and a bit serious atmosphere in the office, at the same time, they complained about disturbance from some trivia in the home especially those who had babies.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that with lots of apps springing out, it’s also convenient and efficient for people to work at home. They can hold the meeting in DingTalk and share opinions any time through Wechat. Actually, such a working pattern provides chance for some lazy people to escape from bosses’ supervision. For example, during working at home, my brother always began to watch some TV show or play video games while holding a meeting in the ipad. Such people severely slow down the development of projects. However, working in the office can decrease the number of this phenomenon.
In a nutshell, after being exposed to my article, I believe that more and more people will come to realize that we cannot emphasize the significance of working in the office too much when considering working pattern and environment.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Working at home through telephone and computer is better than working in a company office 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ideas'' or 'idea's'?
Suggestion: ideas'; idea's
...antees that people can share the latest ideas face to face immediately, instead of us...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... grasp the best choice to make profits. Thus the necessity for the working in the of...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25503355705 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67701399244 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545861297539 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5926332946 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.631578947 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5263157895 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307083072641 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105211181394 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805300805905 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186582200781 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099553324541 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.