Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
A teacart’s ability to relate well with students is more important than excellence knowledge of the subject being taught
Teacher is one of the important persons in everyone’s life. They can guide students for getting the best pathways to success. Teacher has to be knowledgably for being the best teacher but being relating to students is much important than excellence knowledge in my opinion. Because of many reasons compelling in the next paragraphs.
First and foremost, teacher is considered as a mentor and leader nationwide. Moreover, students could take many advice from their teacher which can lead to better future. For instance, talking about my teacher is like a mentor who’s giving me an advice to choose whether being a general dentist or having a specialty in Prosthetic field. Without this good bound and relation between me and my teacher, I would never ask him such this advice about my future. In the same manner, knowledgeable teacher without relate to his students is worthless knowledge because they will never have him like a mentor.
Second, studying to get high grads is not an easy thing to do. Many students nowadays having plethora of information and many resources to study but none of these might stick in their minds. Having me as an example, I studied dentistry and I was so inspired by one of my teachers and because of his motivation and inspiration I got the highest grades in his class. Besides, I still remembering his notes and lectures until today. Furthermore,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...han excellence knowledge in my opinion. Because of many reasons compelling in the next ...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advice seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much advice', 'a good deal of advice'.
Suggestion: much advice; a good deal of advice
...tionwide. Moreover, students could take many advice from their teacher which can lead to be...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...r is like a mentor who's giving me an advice to choose whether being a general denti...
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Line 6, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and lectures until today. Furthermore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, as to, for instance, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00858369099 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7822018756 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587982832618 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9453010959 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7692307692 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133671986635 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495853947333 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688077469176 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103408426088 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785815622199 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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