Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should take basic science courses regardless of their filed of study.
We have entered on the era where education systems are striving to adapt to the constant change in the world, and the fact is that the standard which universities and the society hold to students nowadays has become higher than any time before. People in growing numbers are beginning to support the idea that basic science courses should be mandatory to all college students. As for me, I agree with such proposal for the following reasons.
The first reason I would put forward is that, basic science knowledge helps students achieve success in their own study filed. Basic science is not like high-level science, they are some principles and theorems that can be used to explain many phenomena happened in this world, and they are essential. Thus, basic science can be combined with other subjects, and many problems can be better solved with basic science knowledge. A prime example from my own experience may shed some light on this point. In one of my art history class last year, we discussed about fresco panting, and none of us could figured out the question of why frescos should be finished in short time. Finally, I found one of the materials used in frescos painting was plaster, and it suddenly came to me that plaster is a kind of material which will dry quickly if put into the air. Fresco must be draw upon fresh wet plaster, and it must be done before plaster get dry. That is the reason it should be finished quickly! Without basic chemistry knowledge I gained from my chemistry class, I wouldn’t have solved such question in my art history class.
Another strong reason I support the provided statement is that, understanding basic science brings you a colorful life. There is no denying the fact that science exists in our daily life, and they are everywhere – in the healthy diet diagram you read, in the technology report you just saw, in the new amazon echo you bought and so on, and if you don not get familiar with them, you will be unfamiliar with this fast changing world. Take my grandpa for example, he was not interested in computer and never used it before. Since he took the basic computer science course at our local community college last year, he has been fond of playing it. He began to use searching engine online and find everything he interested in. Basic computer knowledge definitely made my grandpa’s life more polychrome.
Essentially, obtaining basic science knowledge not only contributes to our academic success, but also bring positive effects to our daily life. Hence, the importance of basic science courses should not be underestimated in universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 600, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'figure'
Suggestion: figure
...ut fresco panting, and none of us could figured out the question of why frescos should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, so, thus, as for, for example, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86353467562 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55776616801 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559284116331 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.222325001 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.421052632 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5263157895 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248828338758 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742551684477 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615468661267 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15463530395 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322303540618 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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