If you were offered two jobs, one has average paid and you work normal hours (40 hours a week), the other one has much higher salary but you need to work longer hours. Which one would you choose? State your reasons.
When have entered in the era where most people chasing for high productivity and high profit. There is no denying the fact that people in growing numbers are beginning to devote their personal time to work in order to get higher salaries. Contrary to those people who care more about money, I tend to consider work hours more. I would choose average paid with normal hours work because I think less work hours provide me with more leisure time to stay with my family and enlarge my social network.
Less working allows me to spend more time with my family. There is a popular adage nowadays goes like: Family is God’s way of taking care of you. No matter how unfair and mean this world has treated you, family always functions as a person’s haven, and it is where all loves comes from. As S.Aleichen once said, Money is round, and it rolls away. In my opinion, family should always be put in the first place when you making every decision. Take my father for example, he used to have a heavy job and working overtime was a routine. This had made my mother tired of fixing up household and finally had a bed illness. After that, my father quit his job and found a new one with more vacation to accompany us, and we spend a lot of delighted time together. Thus, light work is more worthy compared to heavy work as one can spend more time with his family.
Less working offers me more chances to go out and make different friends, and thus, enlarge my social network, which is vital in my whole career life. Helen Keller once said, walking with a friend in the dark is better than walking alone in the light. Friends always play an important role in our life and career and they are the key factor of one’s success. A prime example of my own experience may shed some light on this point. I met my best friend when I was spending my vacation with my family. She is definitely an important person I would ask for advice when making a decision, and she offered me lots help when I was applying for an intern outside the university. Thus, more leisure time get from a lighter job can extend your social network and benefit your career life.
Above all, I would definitely choose average paid with normal hours work. Essentially, without heavy work, I can get a close family relationship and enlarge social network contributes directly to my career.
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- Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships 74
- In order to succeed it is better to be more like others than different from everyone else Agree or disagree 91
- The most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment. Agree or disagree? 76
- should children over fifteen years old be allowed to vote? 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., and it is where all loves comes from. As S.Aleichen once said, Money is round, a...
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Line 2, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Aleichen
... it is where all loves comes from. As S.Aleichen once said, Money is round, and it rolls...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, so, thus, for example, i think, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53161592506 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27535372184 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7113414959 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9545454545 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18394831642 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557704089643 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574993125088 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128199206737 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412756857538 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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