Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Determining whether people are less happy or satisfied nowadays or not is an important matter. Knowing this fact will help the health organizations and also governments to find the reasons behind this and decide about it to improve their satisfaction. Some people may think that they are happier than their ancestors while other may disagree. In my opinion people were happier in the past because of two main reasons.
The main reason is that the people are busier nowadays. These days because of the emergence of new technologies and the pace of this emergence everyone is trying to stay on track and tries harder not to fall behind of his competitors. For example, in my workplace, everyone is trying to reach the predefined goal sooner and with best results. Once, we had a project to develop new technologies concerning the automation of vehicles and I and my coworkers were trying to reach the goal first, hence, everyone was really stressful and worried not to fall behind of the colleges.
The other result is that people have got really eager to improve and gain more profits. As mentioned in the previous paragraph the world looks like a race nowadays and as a result people are trying to become perfect and be wealthier. Furthermore, due to the enormous amount of advertisements and movies in which luxurious lifestyle is being advertised, people are trying to look like these movies characters and live like them. This try leads them to work very hard in order to reach that lifestyle. For instance, my cousin is a diehard fan of Jennifer Lopez and she always try to look like her. She makes up so much, do a lot of exercises and etc. for this goal but she is always unhappy that she is not like her. This experience taught me that people are less happy than the past because of their expectancies.
In sum, though some may disagree with my opinion, I deeply believe that people were happier in the past. Not only are they busier but also they have higher expectancies than the past which make them to fell less satisfied. Governments and organizations should figure out a way to change this lifestyle to make people more satisfied and happy in order to increase their mental and physical health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 575, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...rd fan of Jennifer Lopez and she always try to look like her. She makes up so much,...
^^^
Line 5, column 641, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...makes up so much, do a lot of exercises and etc. for this goal but she is always unhappy...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, really, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7734375 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59781386583 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494791666667 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4021879807 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4736842105 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249564077383 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830539520477 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734057954426 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160504713181 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661915159262 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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