Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, life is changing day after day. Many people think that evolution affects us negatively. In my opinion, life becomes more comfortable, and people are now happier than before. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, technology contributed to that happiness, which makes the connection between people more accessible. In other words, nowadays we could communicate more comfortable with anyone, anywhere, in contrast with 20 years ago, it was challenging to stay connected as we are today. Those advanced devices we have made our life easier and happier as well. For example, when I was a high school student, I asked my parents to let me travel to America to continue my studying there. They didn't allow me because the connection was terrible, and they couldn't keep up with me every day easily. Compared with the present, last summer my cousin traveled to Italy to study there, and their parents accepted his request quickly because they will be in touch almost every day. That's why I feel people are now happier and more satisfied than before.
Second, now it's easier to deal with your business without commuting every day. To be more specific, people can finish work in a few hours on their coach. Compared with the past, there was nothing called work online, which made the task harder than now. Although there are people still driving to their work every day, most of them can handle it with a laptop. For example, my father is an interior designer, and he used to drive 100 kilometers every day to the company he worked for, which made his life very difficult to continue then and wasted a lot of time driving and working. After a few years of working, the internet and freelancing websites grew faster, which make my father left his old job and start working online with international clients. He works from home anytime a day. Even while having dinner, he can keep track of his business with his laptop. As a result, he earns four times what he was receiving from his old job, and our life became happier and more relaxed. That makes our relationship with him stronger because now we can spend more time with him.
In conclusion, nowadays life is way better and more exciting than before because of the evolution that is happening every day, which makes the connection between people becomes more manageable, and our work now can be done in our home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'staying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: staying
...t with 20 years ago, it was challenging to stay connected as we are today. Those advanc...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e have made our life easier and happier as well. For example, when I was a high sc...
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Suggestion: didn't
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Suggestion: couldn't
...e the connection was terrible, and they couldnt keep up with me every day easily. Compa...
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Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, then, well, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41480223647 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52619047619 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6212099399 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8181818182 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174437963411 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630371750674 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474945160447 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115173386291 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227856036145 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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