Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People live just one time and it is worth to use all time to be happy and satisfy. For that, I believe that people have to have a job that they want. I support this idea for two reasons, which I will mention in the following essay.
First, the work that goes with your expectations will help you to live a great life. You will be excited when you wake up every morning and think how much you are blessed to have this job. So you will be happy all the time even when working under pressure. People will enjoy every single day in their life and they will not waste the time with complaining.
Secondly, I think as many research paper, a good job will reflect on health issues. That the chance to have health problems such a heart attack, increasing the blood pressure and any other health problems will decrease.
Finally; waiting for your perfect job will enhance the creativity, productivity and became more wealth. Following the "a perfect person is in suitable position"; this means when people do what they want to do, they will have the ability to think how they will improve their skills. How they can make the work environment more convenient. Which ways will enhance the production and makes more money.
As a conclusion; we live just one life, so we have to live with love, hope and do what we want. And one of our great expectation is having a job that fits with our dreams, as I mentioned above; this is the only way that helps us to be special as stars in the sky.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
...th complaining. Secondly, I think as many research paper, a good job will reflect on healt...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y other health problems will decrease. Finally; waiting for your perfect job wi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ther health problems will decrease. Finally; waiting for your perfect job will enha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47445255474 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31010077995 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8369379835 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7333333333 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236078904286 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895372921457 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564839068755 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134882912335 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528211704892 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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