Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, finding a good and pleasant job have been one of the most involved matters for human beings. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether if people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away or wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Some people possess the conviction that once someone finds a job, would choose that whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that usually people wait to find a more proper job. I personally contend that with regard to the recent circumstances, people would take the first job which they find. The following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that from the psychological point of view, People want to have a calm and convenient life. Therefore, they do not take a risk that wait for another job. As a result, as soon as they find a job which satisfy some of their priorities, they persist on be employed in that job. To exemplify, take my personal experience as a real case. When I had been graduated from the university, I was seeking for a job which be relevant to my expertise. After one month I could not find an appropriate job. Thus, I decided to join a group whose work was irrelevant to my popular professional. Had I waited for more appropriate job, I could not find a job.
The second rationale behind this issue is rooted in the fact that in today's world, most of the countries suffer from economic problems. Based on recent economic trend, this condition would become worse and worse every day. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by a recent economic research conducted in our country, show that the rate of unemployment escalates and also the market deals with an unprecedented stagnation. In other words, these problems are caused by combination of inflation and recession. In this circumstance, it is logical that if anyone find a job which is not exactly satisfying, he tries to be employed in that job.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that nowadays, not only people have to take jobs which are not pleasant for them, but also they could take some casual jobs which are not in their expertise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
... reasons. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this is...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... job which be relevant to my expertise. After one month I could not find an appropria...
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Line 5, column 557, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...cumstance, it is logical that if anyone find a job which is not exactly satisfying, ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e tries to be employed in that job. In conclusion, contemplating all the afore...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... jobs which are not in their expertise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85175879397 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79788620533 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510050251256 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4071039846 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.631578947 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35757884998 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116259594679 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111686398323 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220311565995 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110698019795 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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