Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The debate between to be well informed whether rely on the different resources seems controversial, Nowadays, many are adamant that many element should be taken into consideration in order to check the issue fairly. some holds the view that people should rely on multiple resource as much as possible as they were very ebullient than the conventional media while, other prop up just opposite view. From my vantage points, I aver the argument that people should rely on the authentic one even they were shallower in number and, provides my most conspicuous reasons cogently to justify my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that people may get the false information on relying several new unknown resources. people are very hurried to know the information and relying on the non authentic may promote the fallacy. many resources in this generation promulgate the information just to make their own profit; most of the case , they only prioritized the crafted information so that they can attract the a lot of public at once. For instance, we can see a lot of resources which meticulously crafted the information about the certain incident, however, they were not the real one. IN my experience, once I rad the new about the constitution policy changed and its negative consequences. Later, I found that the news was totally absurd, there were no such kind of event had taken place. By seeing this, I literally shocked and obliterate about how believing in unknown source can foxed me instantly.
Another reasons that deserve to say somethings is that sometimes by reading multiple source makes the public keep away to know the real reasons. In this decade of media dominance, they can do anything to lure the public eye; in most cases they may exaggerated and add something nonsense to spice up their news; and most of the case was seen in non authentic one. while the main stream media may not able to give rise to propaganda as they are the responsible body of the nation. so , hearing their news solely may helps to realize them the real story with little change. that's why authentic new prevent the public from believing random speculation and being obfuscated.
On the other hand, people can be well informed by relying only in one authentic resource. All we need to get updated about the current fact; and the technology have been so pervasive that we can get information in rocket speed. For instance, I use to see kantipur to get updated where I usually get the fact and the event just in few times. From the politics to sports, the media easily provided the truth about the information. Moreover, it saves the time of mine to stick in the platform to get the information.
To wrap up, the above mentioned reasons demonstrates the negative impact of following several information from a new resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, kind of, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2380.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 484.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9173553719 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66078900587 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512396694215 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1874998998 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0476190476 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165745797665 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504066910387 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459405058688 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1033881256 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284164431975 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.