Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern era, the result of the development of technology is the hectic life that accelerates the speed of the works as are done by machines. Some hold on the view that being fast and sometimes happening mistakes is more convincing, in other words, the error in the work is more negligible, than be slow but careful and precise. I firmly disagree with the former group, and in the following paragraphs, I will cogently elaborate on my points of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the vast majority of people concur with that quality is certainly more valuable in comparison to the quantity. Nowadays, people pay more attention to the quality of goods compared to their price. Because they believe those deserve greatly more. As a case of point, to consider a company that has an enormous product and every day lots of their goods are entered into the market, but people wait for the qualified goods to be sure about their shopping which does not have any defects.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is that some works are sensitive and every unintentional mistake will lead to the disaster. As a result, it not only harms people but also tarnishes the reputation of the owner. To clarify it with a logical reason, the doctors involved in the health of the persons, and when a doctor visits his/her patients quickly, he might be made mistake and this fault caused death. Hence, quality plays a more outstanding role rather than quantity. Also, the results of the survey at Tehran University, one of the prestigious universities in my country, showed by working carefully the employees have a better feeling about their doing responsibilities and it helps them to have a relaxed mind.
In brief, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that if workers make fewer mistakes and more being sure that everything is as correct as possible, the people, without a shadow of a doubt, trust them and it has positive effect on the popularity of the company among the society or even in the world. Consequently, it is highly recommended that authorities reduce the pressure on workers to cause improvement in many aspects.
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- TPO 18 integrated writing 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ality of goods compared to their price. Because they believe those deserve greatly more...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, in brief, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74457494717 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2429560589 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.857142857 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193435218134 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559081202571 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460239065127 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11234172128 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041613454905 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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