Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since Watt invented and modified the steam engine, automobiles, especially car, become necessities that almost every human beings. Without doubt, it is one of the greatest invention in the human history, eliminating the inconvenience of traveling. However, in my opinion, the decrease usage of cars is predictable twenty years later due to the reason of which I am going to address.
First of all, as the technology advanced, replacement of cars is foreseeable. History would repeat itself. For example, just as horse was replaced by the steam motored cars, now seems everywhere viechles would be outdated in the future. A more advanced and efficient tool or technique would be invented by clever scientists. Accordingly, despite there would still be users who prone to old technology, the total amount of cars would drastically decrease in twenty years.
Secondly, as the awareness of environmental protection, people start to decrease the usage of vehicles relying on petrol fuel. Besides, some of the governments around the world already launch such policy. For instance, Taiwan, recently announce the policy which would provide tax discount and benefit to those who are willing to take eco-friendly vehicles such public transportations powered by electricity.
Lastly, cars market is too competitive that most of the major car producing firm are considering launching new product to make profits. For example, Ford, a predominant company in the automobiles market, announces that they will reduce the production lines in Asia due to the increasing cost of employees, metals, and shipment. Besides, they also acquired a new company, Gogoro, a startup producing motor scooter powered by electricity, and construct several new factory for this kind of eco-friendly vehicle. Therefore, there is no doubt that the number of cars will decrease in the following years.
Industries of cars has been flourished since 18th centuries. Human society cannot become what it is nowadays without the help of cars but as I point out, the decrease and fall of cars are foreseeable within the following years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92515922196 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3769719733 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2352941176 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123846639192 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389859850391 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377081724544 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656271726612 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025714733637 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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