Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;line-height: normal">style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; mso-fareast-font-family:"times New Roman"">In the past decades, saving relationships have been one of the critical issue for human beings. and some times telling some truth put people relationships in danger. people always confront dilemma whether tell lie or not. Opposite opinion of some people, I am inclined to believe that if individuals want keep in touch with each other, they should not tell the truth sometimes. I fell that for two main reasons which I will explaning them in the following assay.style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"times New Roman",serif;mso-fareast-font-family: "times New Roman"">
style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;line-height: normal">style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; mso-fareast-font-family:"times New Roman"">the first reason coming to my mind is that sometimes telling the truth can hurt people emotion. also, some true things can decrease people`s self-confident. as a result of that, friendships can end. To clarify this concept, lies are not always bad. Take a personal experience as an example, I had a friend in high school that we are diffted apart now, she had very unusual style and she had odd and awful hair style too. one day she asked me my opinion about her hair style, and I saied the truth. she felt very bad but she did not saied anything to me. I was regretful that time because i could just say it is good and did not make my friend and I feel bad.style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"times New Roman",serif;mso-fareast-font-family: "times New Roman"">
style="margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;line-height: normal">style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; mso-fareast-font-family:"times New Roman"">Furthermore, another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that telling lie have benefit for many individuals in some case. To be more specific, telling some lie motive your friends to done thier career so well. For example, my father is an professional architecture. When he was young, his painting was not good enough to be an architecture, but my grandmother always acclaimed him and she saeid "my son is the best painter". he always says "had my mother not been praised, I would have not been an architecture".style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"times New Roman",serif;mso-fareast-font-family: "times New Roman"">
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%;font-family: "Arial",sans-serif;mso-fareast-font-family:"times New Roman"">In conclusion, I strongly believe that always telling the truth is not the best choice we can have. this is because truth can dimage people feeling and it can make them disappointed.
- Agree or disagree: In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 10
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2689.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.53221288515 4.8611393121 155% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.2583226919 2.67179642975 459% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560224089636 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.51630824373 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 176.738757027 48.9658058833 361% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.176470588 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0128855130415 0.236089414692 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00754435795487 0.076458572812 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.015689720734 0.0737576698707 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0101437357632 0.150856017488 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00852140931256 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 11.7677419355 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.86 58.1214874552 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 10.1575268817 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 26.39 10.9000537634 242% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.247311828 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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