Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs than to jobs that are very different from their
parents' job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Choice of a specific career is really important of a person's life. If it is not choose with the person's interest it can hamper a
person's total career. However, a plethora of people contents that children should choose the parent's job but other disagree with the statement. Not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelmed. Among this controversy, I personally believe children should choose a job according to the own's interest. I feel this way for several reasons I will expound subsequent followings.
To commence with, personal choice makes the children more confident and motivational. If parents pressurize to choosing their field then children will demotivate. Moreover, children always choose a field that really they like, thus they will work hard to reach the goal and take the job as challenging. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. My father was a teacher and from my childhood, I was interested in the technical site. Before entering the college many of my relatives suggested taking a subject that was related to the teaching. But, I chose engineering that was different from my father's field. I took the challenged and work diligently to secure a better future. Now, I am a successful engineer with different career and it also makes me more confident.
Furthermore, in the past, the job field was limited and now the diverse field is immersed because of the rapid expansion of technology. In my parents day, field was limited and they chose what was better for them. But, time changes and more job fields develope and children should adapt to the changes rather than hold on a conventional career. For instance, in the past internet, the computer was limited and even many of the parents do not know how to operate a computer, an internet. They might know what was abundant in that time like typing, telegraph etc. Thus, now if we choose a father's occupation we might not adapt to the current environment. Therefore, children should choose a career that is now abundant and can easily be secured in future life.
To recapitulate, I am on the opinion that children always should choose their own path where their more skilful rather than parents job because it will make them more confident and can be easily adapt with the current situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...pecific career is really important of a persons life. If it is not choose with the pers...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is really important of a persons life. If it is not choose with the persons inter...
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Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...portant of a persons life. If it is not choose with the persons interest it can hamper...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith the persons interest it can hamper a persons total career. However, a plethor...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Persons
...the persons interest it can hamper a persons total career. However, a plethora of pe...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ildren more confident and motivational. If parents pressurize to choosing their fi...
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Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...I was interested in the technical site. Before entering the college many of my relativ...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to engineer'.
Suggestion: to engineer
...s related to the teaching. But, I chose engineering that was different from my fathers fiel...
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Line 11, column 588, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'fathers'' or 'father's'?
Suggestion: fathers'; father's
...telegraph etc. Thus, now if we choose a fathers occupation we might not adapt to the cu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00257731959 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7658902353 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484536082474 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9993613596 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3913043478 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252537030652 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717946007852 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700298359617 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151521116551 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572890926548 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.