Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Knowledge is power; without it, we are nothing but the only animal. This power is enormous and it can use in our day to day life. There are many people who always say that even though we do not involve with that particular event, we must know that. However, some oppose this idea. As per I am concerned, I will say the former group's opinion is the best. I think this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, knowledge helps us to success in our life; we can use this idea or things to pass different competitive exams. If you want to join government company, you must pass different exams where you have to answer many general knowledge questions. And if you always keep yourself up-to-date with the current events, you will succeed. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I had finished my higher secondary examination, I started my preparation for university admission. I always tried to read the whole newspaper to keep me up-to-date with the world. Even though there were many events that no one focus for their preparation, but I wanted to know everything. After two months of preparation, I sit for medical admission examination, and fortunately, I found many questions related to general knowledge; moreover, those questions were more related to different topics which I had read in the newspaper. On the other hand, one of my friend who worked hard with his subjects basic did not able to answer those part. As a result, I passed the exam and admitted my desired governmental medical college whereas my friend did not pass the exam.
Secondly, ideas are important things which we can use to change the world. If you read different journal, newspaper, and stories, you can get lots of ideas which you can use in your daily life. You may be build or researched something which enhances the world. For instance, few month ago, I read an article in the New York Times about the arsenic problem. According to the writing, 25 % of the people in South Asia are affected by arsenic contamination. This topic impacts on my thinking. Then I went to my university professor to discuss this matter. He said that it is very true for Bangladesh also. Next day we decided to find out some solution to solve this problem. My supervisor was so discreet; he knew that as our country is not so rich country we could not able to solve this by using different costly methods. We found out some vegetables those can absorb arsenic from the land. We started work with planting and growing that furn trees, and we got a good result. This example clearly illustrates that how very simple article can change the world.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are no events in the world from which you cannot get benefits. People should keep touch with the current affairs to help themselves and the world as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...r I am concerned, I will say the former groups opinion is the best. I think this way f...
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Line 6, column 598, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...aid that it is very true for Bangladesh also. Next day we decided to find out some s...
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Line 6, column 851, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...y methods. We found out some vegetables those can absorb arsenic from the land. We starte...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... help themselves and the world as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2364.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68118811881 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55475126973 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518811881188 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0449992534 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2580645161 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2903225806 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.51612903226 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172394392743 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424762421959 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458460009413 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113531695164 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109664145395 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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