Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents
were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Every day we see that many inventions appeared around the world to make our lives more comfortable and pleasant. The advent of new technologies in various aspects made our lives much different from the past. The quality of life, at the same way, affected by this change and many people, like me, think that there is no doubt that today's life is much much easier than before.
It is goes without saying that the level of healthiness has been greatly improved compared to the past. While there were not enough health centers like hospital and clinic in even large cities and there did not exist enough specialized doctors in many fields, nowadays we observe that we can access the nearest health center in less than a few minutes. Every year a number of qualified doctors graduate from prestigious universities are ready to help patients. In addition, a lot of diseases where were unknown and causes a lot of death in the past, today it is very common to be cured by efficient vaccines. Therefore, from the health perspective which is very important factor to human beings, people today bear less pain than the past.
Besides the health factor, the transportation should be pointed out as an important factor of welfare. Long time ago, people did not make use of what we call car today and they transport mainly by horse or camel. In comparison, technology has changed so rapid that people can travel with speed of more than 1000 kilometer per hour. This means than while in the past, people had to walk more than a month to reach to the adjacent country, it can be done just at 1 hour by airplane. Similarly, the difficulties of transportation can be seen in every day’s life of the past people. As long as everyone can buy a car for just a few hundred dollars, I would believe that no one can claim that past life is easier than today.
The technology has greatly helped us to do work much easier than the past. Many electronic devices have been invited and entered to the market can clearly show that task can be done much more easier thanks to new technology: household electronic devices, high powered computers, smartphones, and the world wide web, to name a few. Additionally, the advent of new technologies itself hasten the new developments by introducing precise and powerful devices to measure, test and implementation new hypothesizes and ideas. I think there would not be no doubts that today's life is much different form than past so that no one does not want to live in that period of time.
It does not matter how you are living, you are from which country or culture, and it is a common opinion that today's life is very different form the past from the aspect of easiness. However, people rarely had some negative characteristics which are prevalent today; living in the present century has its advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...e me, think that there is no doubt that todays life is much much easier than before. ...
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Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: much
...t there is no doubt that todays life is much much easier than before. It is goes with...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...can travel with speed of more than 1000 kilometer per hour. This means than while in the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...clearly show that task can be done much more easier thanks to new technology: household ele...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 562, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...think there would not be no doubts that todays life is much different form than past s...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 652, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...at no one does not want to live in that period of time. It does not matter how you are livi...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ulture, and it is a common opinion that todays life is very different form the past fr...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73939393939 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58876572694 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8596574891 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13375599993 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436539117768 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353537892999 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794411627979 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241314722715 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.