Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
With the rapid development of technology, we live in a more different way than the past. we are too much depend on autonomous machines and we spent more time with the technology. I firm belief that with this development we give a negative impact on the future generations, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, with the vast evolution of the world create a lot of needs for people, and as a result, both parents working throughout the day. therefore, children not receive enough coverage and guidance from parents. Most of the time children spent their time in daycare centres that would have made students with no practical knowledge, as they not receive primary education from home. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my elder sister's experienced. My sister is a Doctor and she cannot pay attention to his son. Therefore, her son spends his daytime in a daycare centre while my sister is working. Since that her son did not receive any basic knowledge from their parents and therefore, when he went to the school his basic abilities are lower than other students. Because this, my sister decides to spend more time with his child and that results in better performance of the child than past. For this reason, I feel that what parents live in today may affect their children in bad ways.
Secondly, to satisfy our current needs a lot of industries have started and this caused to increase environmental pollution, which might cause a lot of problems in future. Emerging development in construction sites destroy forests and it reduces the places for wildlife. This may be badly influenced and a lot of species engendered because of this. if the ecosystem is fail like this, the future may create problems like global warming. For instance, very recently part of the amazon rain forest destroyed because of human activities. This rainforest is a repository of ecological services for the world. If these forests are destroyed like this lot of wildlife would be engendered and at the same time, humans face a lot of problems like even in future they might not have enough resources for breathing fresh air. With the above facts, it's certainly clear that what we do today would cause a lot of serious problems than we think.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea that the way we live in today will cause negative impacts on future generations. This is because economic evolution resulted in a bad impact on parents influenced on child and human activities have largely destroyed the ecological system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90519187359 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61625963847 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498871331828 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4316282416 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7727272727 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1363636364 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166006492172 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504931850911 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773794082073 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136108073843 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08781279292 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.