There is no shortage of debate about whether the old generation parents have a strong or less communication with there children about there education career compared to our parents. From my perspective i think that nowadays paranoid are more attached to their children then before. I think this way for the reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, with the development of the world, the new technologies made a competitive atmosphere between people. Unlike the old times where it is more easier to find a job or apply for education, nowadays we need more effort to success. With this radical change the support of the parents has become more and more important. My life is a compelling example. My parents have supported me from the primary school until my year of graduation, in mean while my father talks always about his generation. He claims that there was no support from his parents in the field of education. He explains that in his time, the old people pushing the young more to the field of work. He always say to me that the new generation is lucky because their finding a lot of support from their parents, and I believe his is right. It is obvious when you see all the parents waiting for their children in front of school.
Secondly, the number of private schools and universities have decreased a lot in the final years, and this is a prove that parents financiering their children and encourage them for education. For instance,in 2002 there was approximately three private universities and ten private primary school in Tunisia , However those days the number has surpassed hundreds. This development prove the support of the parents to their children.
Third, a remarkable change in the lifestyle of the people at least in my home country, in the old times most of the family have more then three or four children, and they are not well oriented specially in the field of education, they chose their ways by their own. However, most families now prefer to have two children, thinking that they can handle their education fees and support them to the end of the academic career.
To assume, I strongly believe that there is a big difference between the old and the new era, parents see the light in their children success and for that the encouragement and support is getting more and more bigger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...agement and support is getting more and more bigger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, well, while, at least, for instance, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79556650246 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60522680088 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470443349754 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9381588154 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241610549974 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902319787891 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632624544293 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145004495076 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320459151656 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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