Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past

Task 2:
There has been a contentious problem happening among many people that parents in modern days interfere in their children's education more than in the past. Personally, I strongly endorse this statement for parents hope, the decrease in family members, promising future in following paragraphs.
To begin with, parents want to investigate in their children because of their inability to get higher education in the past. In the previous century, because parents were negatively influenced by wars, diseases,..., they couldn't get a qualified education. Therefore, envolving their children's education assists them to fulfill their hope which hadn’t been carried out before. Take my situation as an example, when my father was a student, he made a great effort in his study and gain achievements. However, he couldn't enter university because of his poor family. So my father not only tries to follow my study but also seeks chances for me to get the best education.
In addition to this reason, the practice of birth control is also an element which attributes to the attention of parents in their children's education. In the past, a family contained many children that could be counted to five or six on average. As a result, it was thoroughly impossible for parents to look after all of their child including their education. However, when the governments launched family planning, a family could solely have one or two children. This allows parents to spend both time and money on their child, particularly in their study. For instance, my grandmother gave birth to 10 children but only one or two of them could graduate universities. She only awared of the family business and outstanding children. Thus, other children had the freedom to do what they wanted even though they immediately gave up attending schools.
Last but not least, parents these days wish their child will have a potential job in this world. Education has dramatically become a hot topic in the world which urges everyone to improve their knowledge. This leads to a highly competitive rate of getting a good occupation. Parents who can realize this issue attempting to require their child study as much as they can, so that they are enabled to defeat other people in the future.
To sum up, parents really make a difference in their children’s education in comparison to the past. Though they consider that it will be better for their child if their children’s study is under control, parents shouldn’t create pressures for them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, after all, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12530120482 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83490058806 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549397590361 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4157446753 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6818181818 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315711927216 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973058141048 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800556458109 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196144192857 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584413419469 0.0645574589148 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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