Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
At present, the educational process has changed enormously. One of these changes is the role of parents in their children's education. Personally, I believe that parents these days are more participated in the educational process of their children than ever before. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, today parents have become more concerned about their children's education than parents were in the past. For many reasons but the most important reason is who much getting a university degree is important? in the last couple of decades, scientific degree has played a pivotal role in determining the future of people. So parents have become more involved to guarantee the best future for their children. For instance, my mother used to teach my brother in the house after school. in addition to that, she forced him to study in the summer holidays. As a result of that, my brother entered a medical school and then he has become a successful doctor in the hospital. All in all, parents are taking apart in the schooling process of their children to make sure that their children are getting the best education and knowledge.
secondly, parents, today want to see a better version of themselves in their children. Some parents did not have a chance in their life to pursue their studies and do their dreams of getting a proper university degree in acquiring high-level jobs. As a result of that, they take part in the educational process of their daughter and sons to put them in a way that they could not pursue. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, after graduating from high school, my father encouraged me to enter a chemical engineering department because this study major was his dream when he was a child but he could not enter it due to poverty. So, sometimes parents have involved in teaching to form better versions of themselves and to see their dreams come true.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that parents nowadays are more involved in the schooling process of their kids than parents were in the past. This because they want to guarantee a better future for their kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83422459893 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60941334501 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489304812834 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0189651378 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1578947368 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303235568506 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104216281901 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106198219235 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208464249682 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397565634455 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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