In this era, People are getting so self-obsessed and busy that they do not have enough time for their families. The lives of people are so hectic and they stick to their curriculum. They do not have spare time to think about milieu. Each person is suffering from hardships and facing challenges in their daily lives. Even on holidays they prefer to spend their leisure time at home. According to recent study, more than 60% of people in India are suffering from depression and anxiety which in itself is the root cause of serious health hazards. In order to make themselves stress free, people like to do things which make them feel good instantly, so that they can overcome their mundane life. That's why, I totally agree with the statement that people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do because of following three reasons.
First and foremost, in this decade of science and technology, the social media has influenced the people very much. They get addicted to their mobile phones because of several Social sites and applications like facebook, whatsapp, twitter, instagram, tik tok, etc. I know these have benefits also as we remain in touch with people who live in another continent but now they become nocuous. The best example is 'Selfie trend', many people started uploading their selfies on FB, insta while doing swimming, river rafting, mountaineering, etc just for fun or just for getting more number of likes and because of this unwary act many of them have lost their lives.
Secondly, people are giving more importance to money instead of their passion and they prefer those jobs which offer them more money. They like to invest their money in only those businesses which give them large amount of profits without giving a second thought whether they are good for the society and environment or not? and their greediness give rise to several scams, charlatans, criminals, etc. For example,last year I heard about the nirav modi scam , an indian millionaire businessman, who had cheated with State Bank of India and looted its 250 million dollars of money and absconded the india. He did not think about the civilians whose money he had taken.
Thirdly, People are getting more reserved and anti-social and do not give importance to relations. They just restrain themselves into the work area. Whenever they are off from their offices, they like to go to movies and shopping and out for dinner instead of visiting their relatives and this is because of hectic lifestyle and scarcity of time. They wanted to do things which they enjoy and also which are beneficial for them like morning walks, routinely exercises, Spa, etc but they could not do all these because of working hours. For example, in my case, as i was preparing for toefl i had to dedicate 8-9 hours of my day to it , I could not be able to exercise daily or watch my favourite TV series because of paucity of time.
In conclusion, because of aforementioned reasons people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do.
- Society should help to recognise those children who have special talents and provide training for them.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to a 50
- The following appeared as an opinion-editorial in a local newspaper:In the last 10 years, the number of patrons to the local library has decreased by a factor of 5, while during that time the number of purchases of electronic books has increased by a fact 55
- The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Movies Galore, a chain of movie-rental stores."Because of declining profits, we must reduce operating expenses at Movies Galore's ten movie-rental stores. Raising prices is not a good opti 55
- nation should follow same national curriculum for all students 50
- In children society should instill them a Sense of cooperation because it is necessary in the field of industry, leadership etc, not competition. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2617.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86431226766 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4821026033 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514869888476 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 801.0 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6625355432 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.782608696 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3913043478 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445009063098 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143017383066 0.076458572812 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201586249373 0.0737576698707 273% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333240838473 0.150856017488 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258010598668 0.0645574589148 400% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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