College students should choose their field of study in order to take employment.
As unemployment becomes one of the serious issues of the nation which leads to anxiety and depression among youngsters or graduates. there is a dire need to take immediate measures regarding unemployment and a significant requirement to counsel the high school students for choosing the field of study when they enter the college which will provide them employment after completing their studies. So, it should be necessary for students to take subjects on the availability of jobs not their interest.
Suppose if someone wants to be a historian in this era of science and technology and they have chosen history as their main subject in college. they have very minor chances of getting a job after the completion of their graduation. As we all know that history is not a professional subject and in order to get a job after college one may have to do either B.ed or MBAas both are professional courses. but on the other hand , if 1 student has taken admission in computer science then after 4 years of college they have ample of opportunites to persue their career in Private sector in any information and technology company as developer or programmer or data analyst.
Still if somebody has interest in becoming a poet or writer or pianist or musicians or dancer they may persue this dream as a side job or for their self-satisfaction with their main job as a engineer or pathologist etc. it is noxious to follow their passion with their job. but yes there are also some desires of people which are not possible for them to carry with their main jobs such as full time chef , etc.
people who choose their profession according to their passion not having job opportunity in their minds most probably regret after completion of college when they find no job in their field and this is will increase anger and guilt in youngsters which will lead to end their lives and also increase unemployment and decline the economy of the nation.
Hence, government of every nation should provide regular counceling and workshops for high school pass outs in order to make tangible decisions regarding their field of study before entering the college giving first priority to job opportunities not their passion or desires.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, regarding, so, still, then, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89920424403 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72412586561 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4006735442 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.916666667 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4166666667 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308862675819 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117839317603 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873295534871 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186743684631 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766494180743 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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