Do you agree or disagree with the following statements
In twenty years that would be fewer cars in use that there are today
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I completely disagree, I feel exactly the opposite of the statement. The world’s population is increasing in a exponential way and together with this, the number of cars is getting bigger and bigger. Nowadays, everyone wants to have a car. Especially, because cars give people the independence to get from one place to another quickly. However, the same people that enjoy this independence, get angry when they spend several hours in a traffic jam.
It is pretty normal that people pass more than one hour in traffic, at least here in Brazil. Chiefly in the big cities, citizens need to get up earlier to arrive at their job on time. Of course, the quality of life decreases so much. Beyond less hours of sleep and a lot of time driving to work, people have become mentally and physically exhausted. For instance, last week my brother was busy and could not take my dad to work. So, I went. But, here in my city the traffic is just terrible at 5 p.m and I spent almost 2 hours getting back home that day. When I arrived at my dad’s house my mind was completely blacked out.
Unfortunately, simple activities could be a nightmare with the amount of cars that we currently have. I am a P.h.D student and if I have an important activity to do at the university, I need to reschedule my activities to guarantee that I’ll arrive at the university on time. For example, last semester we were taking biochemistry classes with Mr. Araujo and that specific day a girl from the class was supposed to show her work for us (Mr. Araujo would then grade her presentation). Our classes started at 8 a.m, but the girl did not arrive on time. We stayed waiting for her until 10 a.m. When she finally arrived, she told us that she was stuck in traffic. I remember that I was just imagining if I was her, how ashamed I would be. So, we cannot assume that the traffic will be fine. It is much better to come earlier and wait for the professor than to have the traffic effect your whole day.
Truly, we cannot deny that cars provide a kind of comfort for our lives, but we need to be aware of the damage to the planet generated by the fuel that we frequently use in cars. It is possible to reduce this with simple actions like offering to car pool or even walking when possible. Unfortunately, we do not always think like this. For example, my boyfriend’s family is about 7 people and everyone has their own car. Even when they are going to the same place, they never offer each other a ride just because each one prefers to go in their own car. To me this type behavior is not good, we need to think more about the world in general not only ourselves.
For those reasons I believe that the number of cars is increasing in the short term. Even though there are benefits offered by cars, we need to pay attention because there are a lot of things involved while we are just driving. Certainly, our planet is one of those things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a exponential way" with adverb for "exponential"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e world's population is increasing in a exponential way and together with this, the number of c...
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Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...orld's population is increasing in a exponential way and together with this,...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...ality of life decreases so much. Beyond less hours of sleep and a lot of time driving to w...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ality of life decreases so much. Beyond less hours of sleep and a lot of time drivin...
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Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: D
...cars that we currently have. I am a P.h.D student and if I have an important acti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, then, while, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, in general, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47955390335 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51826634808 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520446096654 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 763.2 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6446427533 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96666666667 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998519680747 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274023375193 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300771283686 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554713537472 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325835028181 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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