Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Life today is more comfortable than it was when you grandparents were children
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I think today’s life has been easier and cozy to live than a couple of years ago. Definitely, technology has an important role on this progress, which have made life more comfortable. Currently, most part of us do not be able to realize this, but likely our grandparents would be. Activities like, a mobile phone call, paying for bills even at home, buying different kind of foods, clothes etc. Also, nowadays a long travel could be more convenient than a short one, when my grandparents were kids.
Undoubtedly, it is enjoyable anytime when I have the opportunity to talk with my grandmother about how it was everything fifty years ago or even more. I can ask a lot of questions for her and she always surprised myself with her answers. Of course, I was paying attention in all storytelling related with her life that she told me. For example, my brother live in Portugal and last year we take a trip to visit him. We went to the airport, took the plane and in few hours we could arrive in Portugal. My grandma was impressed because we were travelling from so far but we arrived so quickly. How she is a storyteller by nature, it is like a hobby for her, she tell me one more about her childhood. When she was eight and needed to travel for a capital city nearby, because every monday she needs to buy a fabric for her mother sew the family clothes. Usually, in a good day, she could spend almost ten hours traveling in a terrible old bus. She makes me realize how today everything is better, because we have a transportation facilities to support a short travel or even a long one.
At this time, since the discovery of the internet everything became easier. We can communicate with anyone around the world, learning new things even at home, paying for bills, having fun by watching movies and listening to music and a bunch of other things. For instance, I was talking with an old man that lives close to my mother, his name is Mr. Matters, he was telling me about that his grandson do not want to go to school anymore. Just because he hated buses and his mother did not be able to leave him at school by car. Mr. Matters was so upset about it, and he told me when he was a kid he needed to walk almost seven kilometers just to arrived at school, he got tired and how hard was to get focus on classes. Today everything is easier. Also, he told me that how he did not have a computer to use the internet to study, he needed to brough with him tick books. It was so much heavy weight for a child. But, we did not have any choice, he states.
In conclusion, I feel that we are currently making everything is possible to become life more practical and comfortable to live. It is impressive how we change a lot of things in a few times. Actually I am happy because my grandparents are still alive to live all enjoyable things we create.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tells'.
Suggestion: tells
...nature, it is like a hobby for her, she tell me one more about her childhood. When s...
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Line 5, column 888, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...ugh with him tick books. It was so much heavy weight for a child. But, we did not have any c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2320.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38563327032 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52035711741 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517958412098 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6966428008 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9259259259 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5925925926 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122359535351 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366298062162 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342414059723 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078253838808 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256782551857 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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