Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by a747asma on Fri, 03/24/2017 - 07:23

Teachers have a vital role in providing a good education for individuals and no one can deny this fact. Some people believe nowadays teachers are less appreciated for their work than they were appreciated in the past. Personally, according to the following reasons and some of my personal experiences, I think that educators are more cherished nowadays.

The first point to be mentioned is that currently governments are providing a good and adequate financial support for teachers. Take my uncle as an example, his salary has increased dramatically since ten years ago. In addition, there are a lot of loans available for teachers in my country. As a result, teachers do not have any concerns about financial problems and they can concentrate better on their career. Therefore, their performance in class will effectively increase and they can educate our children with a lot of attention.

Another reason that deserves some words is that we live in the age of technology. In fact, every day new devices and products as well as new sciences and technologies is introduced to the market and world. Moreover, there are subjects and topics that one can not understand on their own. What I mean is that people need an instructor to learn complex issues even if there are a lot of tutorials available on the internet. What's more, parents who pay attention to their children's education and future, search for qualified teachers to educate their children. Therefore, teachers are highly valued by parents.

To sum up, based on the mentioned points above it is concluded that teachers have a great status in every society. This is specially true considering the fact that they are raising tomorrow's leaders and contributors. According to this fact governments make a lot of effort to provide financial support for teachers in order to address their economic concerns.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to complex'
Suggestion: to complex
...that people need an instructor to learn complex issues even if there are a lot of tutor...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...of tutorials available on the internet. Whats more, parents who pay attention to thei...
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Line 7, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...der to address their economic concerns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, i mean, i think, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09771986971 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84173533014 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57654723127 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1671230586 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0588235294 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16306512397 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512536977783 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058078807216 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103994111481 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065348347719 0.0645574589148 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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