Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In our life there are many relationships to deal with, among which a vital one is friendship which makes us happy. Some people think it is important to make many new friends overtime, however, I consider it more significant to maintain long-time friendship with a small size of people for the following reasons.
To begin with, long-time friends know me much more than new friends. One essence to happiness in a relationship is that I can talk freely with the person and we discuss everything openly, with our independent yet somehow mutually understanding mind. The situation described is more possible to happen between me and my old friends who have known me for years. In this sense, friends in a long period of time is more important for me to be happy.
What's more, friends I have maintained for many years are more likely to help me when I am in need. I still remember last time I got a high fever in Beijing in the late night. In the time when I was desperately vulnerable, none of my newly made friends offered to go to hospital with me. Yet one of my best friends since primary school, although not being around, kept me accompanied on the phone all the way to hospital. The following days she frequently asked me how I felt and reminded to take medicine and rest accordingly. It is this experience that further reminds me the importance of some old friends who really care about me. Their existence makes me feel that I am not alone even in the darkest and bitterest night, that I am always surrounded by sunshine and sweetness.
Last, just imagine how happy it would be to have two or three friends who could share with you your best memories from youth when you are eighty or nighty years old. Imagine that you sit by the seaside with breezing touching your silver hair, laughing about the jokes decades ago, tasting the flavor of time. I am really blessed to have some friends of that kind in mind, not many, but enough, enough for me to have the courage to walk the long way ahead.
To sum up, I consider friends as lifelong treasure who understand me, help me and mature with me. It is indeed great fortune to have some long-time friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...years. In this sense, friends in a long period of time is more important for me to be happy. ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... is more important for me to be happy. Whats more, friends I have maintained for man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, really, so, still, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5358974359 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50097811241 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54358974359 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1068277635 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2777777778 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288026196402 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104544930452 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092836746971 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190292772889 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105009273643 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.