Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and ex

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...y not find them when in need.for example,i once had many friends when i were at un...
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...chool and then university.by that i mean,even if you had a massive number of new rela...
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...ake friends from other countries as well,but the question is,are these people really...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, well, for example, i feel, i mean, i think, in conclusion, kind of, you know, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05397727273 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20233124562 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 88.0 20.1344086022 437% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 273.530619858 48.9658058833 559% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 444.75 100.406767564 443% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 88.0 20.6045352989 427% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 41.0 5.45110844103 752% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.5376344086 813% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240575158997 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14353306523 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452088390925 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150986296071 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407520010215 0.0645574589148 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.4 11.7677419355 394% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.38 58.1214874552 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.4 10.1575268817 358% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.41 8.01818996416 142% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.2 10.0537634409 370% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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