Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Traveling is a passion and pursuit of many people, traveling helps anyone to explore new things, areas, cultures, languages, customs. More ever, traveling is so important to build a wide mindset, also, provide tremendous information to the person who likes to travel, some people spend a lot of many on traveling in order to spend a good time and to have the opportunity to see how other countries and other people live, some of the tourists prefer to travel on their own or with friends or family members, while others like to be guiding by tour guide. From my perspective, I think traveling in a group led by tour guide is the best and the safest way to travel, so I completely agree with this statement.
basically, traveling in a group led by tour guide is too helpful and enjoyable, because the tour guide definitely knows the area very well and helps the people to find the most important places and attractions in this area, also, he explains a lot of facts about everything, if someone has been traveled by himself for sure, he couldn't know this information, furthermore, the guide already so familiar with best restaurants and entertainment places there, sometimes the most challenging thing in traveling aboard is to find delicious and trusted food, for example, a recent report in the television illustrate the important of the guides in tour, and how they can enrich the traveling experience and make it more informative and more joyful.
Secondary, the traveling with a group led by guide is safer than traveling alone, if something bad happen to one of the travelers like illness or accident, the guide helps in finding a good heath care and hospital, in addition to his knowledge of the language of this country, how to deal with urgent situation in there, to state this point clearly, there is a great movie actually talking about a tour women that she had been shoted accidentally by kids, its name (babel) and how everyone leave her except his husband and the tour guide, he tried everything that he can to help her, at the end he did, if the women is traveling by herself or only with her husband, for sure, she would not survive anymore.
Admittedly, sometime traveling with a group has some disadvantages, like loss a freedom in exploring and loss privacy as well, because the tourists have to follow the group guide in everything and they have to do everything in a group, so that may be uncomfortable to some people, although, the benefits of being with a guide is way more than the disadvantages.
in conclusion, the guide is an essential part of any successful trip, they guide the people to see what is really important in new countries and prevent them from wasting time, money and efforts in places that not really important, they rescue the tourists if any accident happen to them and help them to find everything interesting and entertaining in that place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, may, really, second, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2388.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76646706587 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71971158183 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48502994012 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 750.6 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.1344086022 353% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 222.047246305 48.9658058833 453% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 341.142857143 100.406767564 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.5714285714 20.6045352989 347% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.1428571429 5.45110844103 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291067755622 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159602679955 0.076458572812 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121963557415 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156905103744 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911684780889 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.8 11.7677419355 313% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.87 58.1214874552 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 10.1575268817 293% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.57 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.0537634409 302% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.