Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As time passes and people become more informed, they become more aware of the importance of youngsters’ upbringing. A plethora of people are of the conviction that the rules that societies today expected young people to pursue and obey are too strict and unfair. Others, on the other hand, take a radically different point of view and allege that these roles are required for children. I, personally, support the latter point of view. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on my viewpoint.
The first and most exquisite point which coming to the mind to substantiate my standpoint is that these roles protect the youngsters from a variety of unsuitable condition that endangers their life and conducted them toward an obscuring fate. For instance, today, the unprecedented growth of unfair hobbies such as the different kind of pornography movie, the unhealthy foods, to name but two, overwhelmed the community. Among the people, who live in this society the juveniles have the most passionate toward this things. As a result, they are the possible victims of these conditions, somehow, both their normal life and future affected by their negative effects. So, determining some suitable rules are beneficial for this peoples.
Aside from the reason discussed above, another reason which is equally important, if not more, is that the youngsters have very low experience for encountering different situations and designing a suitable program for their daily works. In fact, in many cases, there is this possibility that they opt the unfair do and invest their time and energy in unappropriated works or aims. Take my own experience as an example, when I was a high school student, It was very hard for me to manage my time for doing my homework and leisure activities. Because the lessons were hard in many cases I spend most of my time for them. As a result, in many cases, I could not gain a suitable grade in my school activity. One they I talk about this problem with my father and he defined some rules led me to pursue those. Consequently, thanks to that rules and my father’s help my grades improved and I learned how to manage my time.
In conclusion, by taking all the aforementioned points into account I agree with this opinion that rules are an indispensable part of life, especially for the youngsters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... some suitable rules are beneficial for this peoples. Aside from the reason discuss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94910941476 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82032115592 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3512701319 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.055555556 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127521017551 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447813764437 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761806384423 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900453472869 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720313267008 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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