Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The society is no longer the same as our parent's generation. Due to the rapid advance of technology and Internet, many ideas and values have been changed. Rules that once were strict are not as how they were nowadays. In my opinion, the rules that societies expect young people to follow and obey are not strict at all.
First of all, attending college is no longer necessary. Internet and technology are growing intensely fast, which contribute to many jobs to be gone and new jobs are created. According to this phenomenon, college diplomas are not as worthy as before. Even though the society still expect young people to attend college, so that they hold a better chance to find jobs with higher income, young people can still prove themselves by creating their own businesses online.
In addition to education, moving out to live on their own is important for young people to learn to be independent. For many parents in the US, it is common to let their kids move out at the age of eighteen. Some people might claim that it is too harsh for young adults to move out as they graduated from high school. But this is for the good, and things are easier nowadays because they can find solutions online.
For instance, they can have the chance to fix the broken light bulbs with their own hands, and not to rely on their parents.
Viewing from the opposite perspective, some people dispute it and stress that young people nowadays are living under a more difficult society. For one thing, it is still uneasy to find a job without college diploma. Also, the economy is not well, young people can not afford the extend living costs. These make it harder to follow the rules that societies expect. However, These are minor problems that can be easily solved by the Internet today. Many people follow these society rules and still live favorable lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 276, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s not well, young people can not afford the extend living costs. These make it harder to f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, well, for instance, in addition, first of all, for one thing, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72923076923 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26866277116 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513846153846 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7441555079 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8947368421 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217544781329 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072853568488 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925002099865 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11860193655 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751976089153 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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