Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I am absolutely agreed. Money is the main motivation for humans, because, all activities will be culminated in profits and the definition of the profit is equal to more money. It might be in cash our other bonus' but, it would be turned into money. Professors are humans too and, they need enough money to manage their life including make the family happy. Researchers' role in the society and impoving the level of the life is indispensable so, thequestion is that why they should gain solary less than other jobs? There is some reasons to support my idea as follows:
People are affected by their mentor amazingly and they would be so respectful about them, whether the mentors are university professors or school teachers; I think, this kind of effectiveness is rare in the world and according to my experiences, people are submissive to their mentors as well as they were in the past. Paying ample attention to teachers and professors could improve their proficiency and makes them enthusiastic to work better than they used to do. Moreover, authorities could take advantages of this issue to entrench and cultivate some cultures, which the society does not accept them easily; For instance, the government is to ask people to save energy and help the government with reducing extra expenses in the energy field. The ministry of education can ask its staffs (teachers) to raise this subject in class; Because, the students are so biddable, they would complete this chain by nagging their parents to save energy!
Professors educate young people who are the hopes of the country. Admittedly, the professors have been known as a paradigm of honest people that try to teach anything and, receiving a normal salary in turn; Needless to say, it is not fair that a mentee, like doctors, make more money than they mentors! How can a good government stand to this problem? I mean, teachers, including professors, deserve more money in comparison with their students.
Of course, there might be some objection about my opinion like does any professor deserve this kind of promotion? I should say that paying more salary changes all teachers to be a good and deligent one. So, plotical issues should consider encouraging teachers and professors.
All in all, professors as the most important people who make the future of the country, should be apprecieted properly and they deserve any kind of bonus. Were it not for professors and teachers, most of the country would remain retard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 515, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are some reasons'?
Suggestion: There are some reasons
...hould gain solary less than other jobs? There is some reasons to support my idea as follows: People ...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mentor'
Suggestion: mentor
...like doctors, make more money than they mentors! How can a good government stand to thi...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hers, including professors, deserve more money in comparison with their students....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, i mean, i think, kind of, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95673076923 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64228512335 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524038461538 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.6982982436 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.875 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916637150206 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338003217967 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285106905332 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534766443897 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220440842874 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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